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Friday, 08 February 2008

I forgot to put the soap suds in.

So the washing's been done twice.

It's baked potatoes supper time,

So why've I soaked the rice?

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The milk is in the cupboard

And my purse is on the stair.

TV remote's gone missing

It'll turn up Lord knows where.

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I used to make up ditty's for

My daughter as a child.

She'd solve the rhyme to win a prize.

My prize was when she smiled.

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Now she's ill and coming home

She wants her Mum she says.

I wait to see and touch her face

Two more eternal days.

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Terror lies within my heart.

So I pray that by God's Will

She'll mend to live a happy life

And be here a long time still.

 

 


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1. 08-02-2008 15:38
Maddie - what a beautiful poem! You are a talented lady! I hope you are getting all the rest you need and some peace of mind. I am praying for your daughter as well as for you. Thank you for sharing!
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2. 08-02-2008 17:17
"My prize is when she smiled" 
 
I love that. This poem is very sweet. I hope you and your daughter are doing well. Lean on eachother. ((Hugs))
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3. 08-02-2008 19:52
That's awesome! Keep it up -- do lots and lots of them! I bet you have a million of them going through your head!!  
 
It says it all! Thanks! :) 
 
Still thinking of you - and saying those prayers - and doing those visualizations!!  
 
Love,
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4. 08-02-2008 23:53
Maddie, that is a beautiful poem and probably is so true for you. Hopefully when you have your daughter back home things will begin to sort themselves out. ((hugggsssss))I didn't know you wrote poetry, you are wonderful, you should write more :)
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5. 09-02-2008 00:56
Wow, you wrote that?? Great work. Hope all is ok.
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6. 09-02-2008 08:22
What a beautiful poem! Hope all is well with both of you
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7. 09-02-2008 22:28
You're an amazing woman and a wonderful mum. 
 
Faith as small as a mustard seed can move mountains. Praying for you both.  
 
xxLeah
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8. 11-02-2008 10:14
Awesome, Maddie! 
Please post more of your poetry. 
You ROCK! 
Kira
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